Tuesday, September 28, 2010

paragraph entry# 1 " use descriptive language to describe a person that you know"


Ruby is very confident with the “S” curve of her body. Mostly every day, when people enter the school, she gives all the girls in the school a ridiculing smile. Sometimes, she says derogatory things to her class mate, even though they didn’t do anything that makes Ruby feel condescending. Her face always glitters- goes along with her sparkling outfit. We could use a metaphor to say she is a chipped black rough diamond that has been covered on by some magic sparkle stuff.

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